Sounds good!
I like the vibe of you three...very good sound and great ideas!
Though I`d like to add something:
The appearance of this tune is rather mellow, soft, sensitive...at least the guitar and bass puts it like this. I wouldn`t add too many notes to the whole thing, don`t try to play all the notes the guitar is playing on the drums as well. An example are the 16th notes on the ride cymbal, it just makes it sound very busy. Try to keep it more relaxed at some spots. I like your approach...so why not expanding this?
For a B part you could either take a little break to breathe from the straighter rhythm you`re playing in the A part (crashing your cymbals here and there, keep it calm to support the mellow character)...or playing a straight rhythm. The difficult thing when doing latter is make up the contrast without breaking it in two halfs.
My ideas...anyway, nice job...I dig it!!!
Karl