LukeSnyder
Gold Member
Hey guys, I'm gonna order a batch of business cards, and I'm doing the layout myself. Here's I design I worked on for a little bit. I rather like it. Any advice? I'm interested in anything you can offer me!
Nice effort, Luke. I like the cymbals picture. When I reduced the browser screen size to get the car at biz card level I felt the type wasn't very clear. Darkening the contrast strips a bit more would help.
Also, "sessions work" sounds a bit clunky. I'd go for "session work".
I like it, apart from the typeface used on the contact info. I'd for a more standard font, it just looks more serious (to me, anyway).
Also, no need for the "user" part in your YouTube URL. www.youtube.com/LukeSnyderMusic works fine, and is easier to type/remember.
Lookin' good. Much more clear.
You can skip some of the punctuation too for extra clarity, like the full stops Drummer Educator etc and also the colon after "session work".
Also you could skip the www in the URL too, tho' it at least tells the more clueless prospective student (or student's parent) that it's a web address.
Remove the colon and increase the size of Luke Snyder.
I like the dots, Polly!
Hmm, I suppose I could do that... the punctuation there does serve some purpose. The periods after those three words project confidence, a sort of solidness. Thats very subjective though, the minimalism may be more striking.
I hesitated before writing the dots comments but decided on clean and modern. Still, I get where you and Cameo are coming from and it's valid enough - the dot makes it a statement ... LUKE SNYDER
[deep newsreader voice]
DRUMMER [clang!]
COMPOSER [clang!]
EDUCATOR [clang!]
Hardcore
Yep Luke, that last version is in the pocket to me.
No probs, Luke. It was a tag team effort
Hope it works out for you.
I agree; the last version looks hot! Great stuff
I agree; the last version looks hot! Great stuff
I agree too.
Nice job!