Your, or our, biggest problem is that we can't really hear f.ex. the bassdrum. The cymbals take up too much of the sound, or phase out other frequencies. Which I think is a common problem on most low quality recorders. So the sound quality is crap.
Other than that, the playing itself seems pretty good, not bad for having played 6 months. I'd experiment with perhaps tuning the snare a bit differently, maybe loosen the snares or something. Again, it is hard to say because the sound quality is bad, if you like your snare sound then keep it.
Also, I'd suggest looking into other styles of drumming to learn some different styles. Which, of course, you can work with and implement into whatever genre you like best (I am guessing heavy metal/hardcore). Thinking innovatively and being creative with your drumming is really what it's all about.
Good job and good luck.