I liked your playing until the solo. Man, WTH?
Also, why did you look so pissed off while playing? A problem with the guitarist?
Anwyay, back to the solo, listen to the original a bit better, because you seemed to be trying to do something very similar, but that's not how it goes. Totally lost the momentum messing up the beginning of the solo, mainly.
The rest is very nice, you even got the cymbal accents where Jimmy jumps.
Fox.