Constructive Criticism Needed

[alvanko]

What are your thoughts on my sound and technique? This is me playing with a drumless track. Personally, I like the sound of the drums. Nice punch from the bass. My playing isn't perfect but (my opinion) not too bad. Try not to insult me too bad. I'm only looking to improve.

 

[David Floegel]

Hey mate,

so I've listened through your track and you seem to have a good feel in my opinion.

Two things I would suggest:
Work on your timing, especially on the bassdrum. The placement choice is cool, but execution a bit sloppy =)
The snaredrum fills are a bit out of time as well but I'm sure you've got a lot of potencial.

In general I enjoyed listening!
Your sound is pretty good and as I said, great feeling!

Hope to hear more from you =)
David

 

[alvanko]

Listen to this one too......