transcription gojira

Hello drummers of the world, so Im in a band and the singer is the one pretty much making the songs, and the thing is that he also "writes" the drum parts... now he doesnt know how to read music or play drums, he just finds nice rithms in the beat bank of ezdrummer or addictive drums and use...

I had originally posted this in the general discussion section and didn't get any feedback. This seems like a better place so please, metal drummers, tell me what you think.

My first song transcribed note-for-note. took some time and it's obviously not completely accurate. It'd be nice to get some feedback from some metal drummers because i'm not one myself.