Originally Posted by Deathmetalconga
Your shirt is too much the same color as the background and you kind of get lost. I'd use something bit a bit more contrast.
I think there's definitely enough of a difference between the values of the background and the shirt, especially in the shoulder area, that this shouldn't be a problem. I like how the kit, shirt, and background all "kinda" match.
You look like a serious player in both pics. Nice composition and facial expression. I'd hire you for a session...