Originally Posted by Pollyanna
In another, a highly ethereal tune, he chose a staccato voice which he plays out of time.
I liked the second version guitar part better . . . just there was some dead space in the middle of it--what happened to the keyboard? (That's the part you overdubbed, I take it?) The second version could really use that, but not, in my opinion, at the expense of what the guitarist was doing--in addition to it instead.
I wouldn't say that he was out of time, but there are different senses of time going on--different people playing slightly ahead of or slightly behind the beat. I do not think that's necessarily a bad thing, but the way to iron it out is usually to just play with each other a lot more.