Re: HUGE FAVOR PLEAS HELP
As it was her first time she did well to go through with it. She sounds as if she's holding back and not using her breathing to it's greatest effect. She could be a little punchier and express a little more emotion. She will need to practice and could benefit from some tuition even if it's only the basics to help her confidence.
Try her out a few more times and see if she relaxes into it and starts to enjoy it.
OK, OK It's back to rudiments for me! I'll be back in a few months