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Old 07-20-2007, 06:35 AM
millerdakiller
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Default Re: Lyrix what I wrote for the new album...

that's a good start man, but the rhyme scheme and rythym are a little predictable for my taste. That's just me though. Try experimenting with different rythmic phrasings in the lyrics.
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