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T C S 08-28-2011 04:56 PM

Song Help?
 
I need help writing the second verse, any help appreciated

I know what I want to write about but the correct words don't come... I only can force them out and I find my best writing is straight out from like the first verse I wrote but the second verse was down rhyming dictionaries and computer research which I don't like. Here's my second verse that I have come up with which I hate/mildly dislike and the song is about moving away from a place you loved, then revisiting later in your life:

Walking down the pathway
Recalling old times
The unmistakable shipping bay
Embedded in my mind

Also, this is my second ever song and is the first ever story telling meaning lyric.

Thanks for any help


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