Playing on a technical level was definitely there. I think you should tighten your snare wires a little more, sounded quite boxy. My issues pretty much only lie within your drum part vs. Dom's original – you brought more attitude to the performance but I think it was the wrong kind of attitude. Additionally, your choice of sound source (toggling between hi-hat and crash) seemed nonsensical. It's the difference between playing for the song and playing on top of the song. Again, timing was good, mix perfectly fine, etc., just some suspect artistic decisions I think.