My original songs(comment please!)

[CountHavoc]

Me & my guitarist jammin on our song's.
http://www.youtube.com/user/counthavoc75

Please let me know wheather u like them or what change's u think you'd make to make them better.Am open to all criticism.It's the only way i'll get better!

[keep it simple]

Not my genre so difficult for me to be objective, but you seem to have all the basics together. Nice stick drop btw. Seems like you've got the kicks quite tight but the sticking a bit loose by comparison. I think just concentrate on tightening everything up and vary the fills a bit.

[CountHavoc]

Not my genre so difficult for me to be objective, but you seem to have all the basics together. Nice stick drop btw. Seems like you've got the kicks quite tight but the sticking a bit loose by comparison. I think just concentrate on tightening everything up and vary the fills a bit.

Thanx heaps!
Really appreciate ur in-put.Gotta say but,i thought my fill's were varied & my kicks were flat,LOL,but will DEFINATLY take ur advice on board.As i said,i just want to get better & all & any criticism is appreciated

[KnockOut86]

Yea I really dig the music, its definitely my kinda genre. Your bass technique is really good and I really enjoyed it. I have to agree with KIS the fills are what bothered me...I mean at one point you play the same fill 8 times in a row. Just a minor adjustment would make a world of difference...like go from playing the same fill on the high toms to playing it on the floor toms, so your not changing any sticking or anything but you get a different sound, would still fit with the guitar too. Just a suggestion thou! You said you were open to them so I wanted to add my opinion. Overall I really enjoyed it!!

EDIT: Okay not 8 times in a row, 6, but then it goes into a nice roll. By the way im talking about the one that starts with the hihat if you didnt know which one I meant.