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pipi6000
01-10-2007, 02:18 AM
I showed you my band before, and alot of people didnt like the screaming...Well I practised my fanny off and well here is our first song recorded for our demo :)

Tell me what you think of the song as a whole, drums, guitar, screaming...Everything!!

www.myspace.com/deceit1

Tama Player
01-10-2007, 02:55 AM
Well first off, becareful of what you say (Cursing) Nutha and Dog and Bernhard will get on you about that. ; )

The band....well I usually like screaming and stuff like that, but for some reason I didnt like the way the singer(s) sounded. But the drumming wasnt bad. Sounded a little tense but still loose and having fun! You had some speed and your fills sounded pretty good. It didnt sound recorded properly, you should run it through a music editing program such as FlexiMusic. It sounded a little "fuzzy" throughout the song. Your guitarist sounded like he knew what he was doing, even though there was some pretty heavy distortion through it. Anyway, wasnt bad.

Peace
AGR

pipi6000
01-10-2007, 03:06 AM
Well thats cool...Thanks!

Joe Kearney
01-10-2007, 04:06 AM
I'd recommend "The Zen of Screaming" for your screamer. It's an excellent DVD. As for the drums, very solid. My own band is going to record an EP in aout two months, so it should sond a lot better drumming wise and sound quality wise soon. And I also noticed that the band name "deceit" is already taken, their drummer is in MD this month. Anywho, good luck to you and your band.

Shinx
01-10-2007, 04:13 AM
The guitar and drums don't sound too bad. The guitar playing is enjoyable, but it is a bit fuzzy. The drumming is pretty solid. It doesn't really have much punch, to me at least, probably a recording issue. Maybe a bit more bass would help, which I saw your bassist actually said. The singer might need to strengthen his voice a bit, the rawness is good but it felt just a little weak.

pipi6000
01-10-2007, 04:14 AM
Whats wrong with the screaming? And by the way its me..:) And Thanks for telling me that...This sucks now we have to change the band name again..grr thanks for the heads up at least...:)

Tama Player
01-10-2007, 05:03 AM
They have some cool sites up for band names like this one (http://www.amiright.com/names/cool/). My band got there name from there, ( dagger heart) and it is really thourough and some really cool ideas. Just look out for the really stupid (or should I say senseless) ones like, The Soggy Muffins, etc...

Peace
AGR

Almuric
01-10-2007, 03:00 PM
Decent drumming interesting guitar work, then something happens on the microphone... I don't know what, but it sounded rediculous. I had to laugh and click the red x quickly. That's just me though. Some people like a poke in the eye with a sharp stick.

pipi6000
01-10-2007, 09:12 PM
Meaning? This post is too short...

Almuric
01-11-2007, 03:13 AM
Meaning? This post is too short...

Sorry. I should have said "the vocal microphone". I don't get the screamo stuff. Sounds pretty hilarious to the uninitiated. But hey, that's why there's chocolate and vanilla. Go for what you dig! And go HARD!

Solid drumming!

pipi6000
01-11-2007, 03:49 AM
Oh, well then thank you my good man! To each his own...I may re record the vocals, because I do agree that it is a little choppy at parts...Thanks all! Keep em coming!

indiadrummer
01-13-2007, 04:46 AM
well I heard the first scream and had to cover my ears, but then I heard the rest and it was very good. I dont know why, the first scream hurt a bit. Whatever. The song as a whole is solid. I think this was said earlier, its good to have a solid voice. You have been blessed with a raw voice, but I think if it were a bit more solid (you know, stronger, less wavering) you would be just perfect. I didnt hear much bass though :(

pipi6000
01-13-2007, 06:06 AM
Thank you! Yeah, We are going to re record the song, mix it a little better. And Im going to try to even out the voice. Thanks for the great comments! And yes, that first scream was kind of a joke early in the morning...I tried to hold it as long as I can...Didnt work to well

gusty
01-13-2007, 06:47 AM
i hate screaming, so it would be unfair for me to comment that, but solid drumming.